Reviewof Ameena's poem, Mia Forbes

Well first of all I thought this poem was really cool. I especially like how you tried to play it cool when you were like really stalking this guy. This is relatable as well because many girls will see a guy that they really like and then when they begin talking to them they start to play hard to get and act like they are not worth the time of day and I like how that is the feeling that I got from this. Also when I first started reading it automatically sounded like you. It was like I could hear your voice reading this poem to me and I thought that was a major thing because it defines you. I also like the story in this poem and how it is in a chronological order opposed to it being all over the place because I could actually follow it. I like how you set the scene in the beginning as well. I do wish that there would have been more dialogue in here. I think that by saying the all the question he may asked about yourself and then your responses would have gave the poem more definition. I thought it would have taken the end of the poem to a whole other level. Other than that I loved it!