Ameena,
Hello. Nice to meet you. Is about a person meeting someone that they have seen on Facebook, in person. I like that you describe everything, reading the persons page as well as meeting them. “We were introduced/Have you met/No” is when I realized what the poem was going to be about. I like that this is something relatable, everyone does this. If I were in the same situation, I would act the way the person in the poem did. The diction is simple but it makes it seem like it could happen today. I really like how when you read the poem you feel like you’re in the authors head and you can see what they see. However, I would add more to the end, it seems less descriptive. Adding more too how the person is reacting, how they feel, how they look…possibly? Would make it better, I think.
Meghan
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