Joann Adamczyk's reveiw of Clare's Poem

Taking a Sit in the Park
By:Clare McCauley

I did like this poem and i enjoyed how you described the insects of late August picking at your skin while sitting in the park. I think the adjectives and imagery you used is very successful. i especially liked the line, "Perfect Pickings for late August insects. Eating me alive, devouring my ankles whole. Toes too. Spaces between sandal leather are declared an all you can eat buffet." The only thing i would change is adding more words per line to make each line more of a complete thought. But i overall did enjoy reading your poem.