This reader is confused as to what the subject of the poem is. It leaves much to the imagination and that is because it is ultimately directed at nothing. Did this writer say the subject matter is unclear? If there were a succinct subject matter this could be a useful and powerful piece of literature. The comparisons and contrasts are beautiful and descriptive--but of what? Please expand on these beautiful thoughts--what a wonderful beginning of something greater to come!
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