Ben's analysis of A Moment N Ur Eyes by Kenneth

This lyrical poem describes the feelings one wished to gain while being with someone they love. The refrain is clever, using interesting examples of wanting someone more and more like a 69' Vietnam tour. The line, "Can U draw a perfect circle?-cuz I want U all around me" is a good illustration of the desire for personal interaction. However the structure of the poem is confusing, allowing the reader to become lost halfway through.