Jackie's review on Becca's poems

I really enjoyed reading Becca's poems. I liked how both of her poems had a relationship between each other. I really enjoyed how Freezing Fire had all the lines that contrasted with each other. I thought it make the poem much more interesting. I really liked the lines "Our loving hatred, gives hazy clarity, and forms our perfect flaws." I think Becca did a great job playing with the words in her poem. I really enjoyed Becca's poem "Religion" I don't know if everyone can relate to religion in this way or feels this way about religion but i do believe the ideas Becca writes about in this poem everyone has contemplated once in their life. I felt that this poem had a great topic for a poem. The idea of Religion is a huge topic and is discussed all the time. I really enjoyed the lines "If my hear dies, the blood is on you hands." and "I wont risk my life, my love, my logic" The only suggestion i would give Becca it to try to give more imagery in her poem "Religion" it is a very strong and powerful poem but i believe that if it had more imagery than it would be even more powerful than it already is.