Kenneth Sievers, "My Daddy's Cologne"
The beginning of this story has an excellent feel. A reader gets the sense that maybe it's set in the early 1940's, which intrigued me. I think Kenneth should have stayed with this time set, even if it was not his intention. The rest of story carries no revelance to the beginning of the story.
Rhiannon Feehly, "Mama"
I enjoyed this story, especially the ending. I liked how her dream was death in reality. I also liked the revelance to winter. It just seemed appropriate for the story because winter is cold, and so is cancer. One thing I would change about this story is it's depth. It has a great synopsis, but no actual story. It would be nice to know more about Lily, and how she feels about her mother dying, maybe have history repeat itself?
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