Thursday, September 29, 2011

Critique of Holdon’s poem Midnight

Critique of Holdon’s poem Midnight
This was a poem about religious controversy.
I really like the way the poem moves, it seems very fluid.
It is a piece that makes you think, and takes you from one point all around and then back to the same point. It has a start and a finish.
Something I would have liked to see is Holdon elaborate more on the times that represented the Apocalypse. Something else I would have liked to have seen is consistent tense (First person, second, etc.)

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