Alana Roach’s Crirtique of Nicki’s “C’mon man, give it a try”
This short story takes place in an alley way. The main character Jared gets addicted to this BMB drug, and ends up selling it to support his habit.
I think this did a good job of describing an active addiction. Her action scenes were written well, and I think she captured the mind set perfectly.
I wish that it was longer. I wish I got more of a description of Jared. How he grew up. Where he lived, etc.
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